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Breath of Life
Sailing seas from dawn of time,
to elicit prose in sailor's rhyme.
Singing lullabies to lonely wives,
Encourage music from the chime.
Brings new life when spring arrives,
nature's random fury, taking lives.
Bearing fragrant menu to the bees,
the nectar transferred to their hives.
It's gentle sighs caress the trees,
swaying branch to oust the leaves.
flowing over rolling hills of green,
this restless spirit, all life receives.
Born again and again, it never dies,
on the breath of life, all life relies.
to elicit prose in sailor's rhyme.
Singing lullabies to lonely wives,
Encourage music from the chime.
Brings new life when spring arrives,
nature's random fury, taking lives.
Bearing fragrant menu to the bees,
the nectar transferred to their hives.
It's gentle sighs caress the trees,
swaying branch to oust the leaves.
flowing over rolling hills of green,
this restless spirit, all life receives.
Born again and again, it never dies,
on the breath of life, all life relies.
Published 11th Mar 2014
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14th Mar 2014 6:13pm
This is beautiful. From the unique rhyming scheme tying every stanza to the next to the way you've described flowers, I was captivated.
"Born again and again, it never dies,
on the breath of life, all life relies."
"Born again and again, it never dies,
on the breath of life, all life relies."
16th Mar 2014 11:17am
10th Apr 2014 9:09am
A beautiful image captured so shortly and sweetly. A very nice write, which is made even more powerful by your choice of rhymes.
13th Apr 2014 5:19pm
Thank You so much for taking time to read and comment, sorry I did not reply sooner but have away for a while.
To The Wind,
R.T.
To The Wind,
R.T.
