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syncretism in blue
ingest me
take within you this essence
which is merely a poor
& unworthy me
where you travel i travel
what you dream i dream
my ardor will brace your mornings
as the stars hold up the heavens
imagine an amalgam
of passionate meditations
(yours & mine)
to make one poem
of twisted tendrils
sumerian skies
a moonscape of lovesongs
wolf skin boots, howling
agony’s ode, dark daughter
a soldier of secrets
heart bursting untamed
a ceremonial offering; blue angel
place me gently
in vague apprehensive chambers
a heart, without breaking
carry me blue
for now
for ever
(designed with the grace of blue_angel)
Published 8th Mar 2014
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8th Mar 2014 8:55am
8th Mar 2014 12:51pm
When I read what I have written, I see thoughts jotted down.
When I read what You have written, I Feel a True Poet.
When I read what You have written, I Feel a True Poet.
8th Mar 2014 1:38pm
8th Mar 2014 2:17pm
8th Mar 2014 2:55pm
Surging Verses afloat- eloquently reflecting, the weave, pausing to swirls then set further adrift against the awe of these silken waters of poetic emotions. I'm purged in elation, John. Worthy beyond measure. *Kneeling in honor. Thank you*
8th Mar 2014 3:34pm
a masterpiece of a love poem to an amazing woman.. in love with this write :) with love and respect Crim
8th Mar 2014 5:02pm
the different love postures may I say or adore..totally taking in, travel like a breeze together,joining in ( btw, loved the reference,amalgam n the one in title, syncretism), intertwining, placing, carrying..oh wow! the wholesome offering this one..lovely read, beautiful share.x
8th Mar 2014 9:07pm
8th Mar 2014 9:09pm
8th Mar 2014 9:41pm
Soft words, powerful feeling of emotion all very eloquently poured into verse. Wonderful loved it hun, xx
9th Mar 2014 7:14am
Yoir tributes are always so in depth. This is beautiful and blue angel is a gfreat writer. I still remember the one you made me... Think I'll go reread it now
9th Mar 2014 7:04pm
ahhh....I felt the connection in your collabs, and what a beautiful energy to witness. The depth of admiration penned in this inked can't be measured. Simply lovely!
Poetic Respect~
Poetic Respect~
10th Mar 2014 4:03pm
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