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i guess im never satisfied
how i wish
you spent as much time
as you do trying to please me
to make sure
im actually pleased
you spent as much time
as you do trying to please me
to make sure
im actually pleased
Published 4th Mar 2014
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4th Mar 2014 5:22am
4th Mar 2014 6:25pm
1, the title applies literally to the comment above...lul.
2. It's got a wonderful point. Short, sweet.
2. It's got a wonderful point. Short, sweet.
