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Preechit.
"Art is not supposed to be pretty.
It is supposed to provoke."
Sexualize the children
drop the bombs of
waist-line
sweeten our social satire
like we were beautiful
instead of pathetic
because
we are enmity and
we are the stale breath
of anorexia
and obesity.
Sometimes, it's not art.
It's just ugly.
It is supposed to provoke."
Sexualize the children
drop the bombs of
waist-line
sweeten our social satire
like we were beautiful
instead of pathetic
because
we are enmity and
we are the stale breath
of anorexia
and obesity.
Sometimes, it's not art.
It's just ugly.
Published 2nd Mar 2014
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2nd Mar 2014 7:58pm
2nd Mar 2014 9:12pm
3rd Mar 2014 4:57pm
Love this, its powerful, to the point and unyeilding. Makes me think of System of a Down.
3rd Mar 2014 5:20pm
5th Mar 2014 9:07pm
I can see the connection with System of a Down, made me think specifically of Ddevil for some reason.
5th Mar 2014 11:39pm
5th Mar 2014 9:09pm
Also reminds me of an episode of Law and Order I saw last night where an artist had painted a picture of a woman with her hands cut off. Long story short, one guy hated it so much he killed the museum sponsor and cut off her hands. He didn't think it was art, just grotesque.
You have a choppy flow that I like... I don't know if that makes sense. It's like, jumping ideas, but in a way that flows. Maybe it's just the way I interpret it.
I really love the poem.
You have a choppy flow that I like... I don't know if that makes sense. It's like, jumping ideas, but in a way that flows. Maybe it's just the way I interpret it.
I really love the poem.
6th Mar 2014 10:35am
17th Mar 2014 7:03pm
17th Mar 2014 7:55pm
