Lust

I read this twice.
No lightness here.
But very well crafted.
I think its honesty about the need for sexual pain jumps off the page into a twisted love story.

I was going for light but the hunger in me overpowered my inking.. good eye Poet :) thank you with love and respect Brenda

Love this! Great write Crim :)

thank you Tommie for the lovely comment and add to your list with love Crim :)

Lovely Crim, I humbly bow to your superior talent. *bowing*
Never have I written words this sexually powerful.
Bravo! Bravo!  *applause*

it's I that am humbled by your gracious words thank you ever so much.. much love Crim :)

Lusty perfection, You drop 274 pages of hot molten erotic passion on us... We hinge on your pens pleasures...The Lovely softness is felt through the aches. :)

beautiful Angel thank you for the love you shown me it's deeply felt with love and respect Crim :)

thank you Gabriel you always give the sexiest comments :) much love Crim

 Brenda this speakers volumes to me. You can be in my head so often with your words. They are powerful and important. Vulnerable and strong.
 As you know its not just about the acts. They are just the result of living this way of feeling and thinking. It's not a choice for some of us. And it's not just an urge. It's a mainline to the core of who we are.
  All power and love (and lust) to you dear lady. Intense, honest ink Miss Crim. That's valuable. Thank you. :)

TS you see through me so well I am vulnerable and strong.. Your heart of gold shines to me like a beacon in the darkness.. Your writes are profound and touch my heart and soul.. No it's not a choice just the way we are wired thank you for getting that.. though getting to know you better I understand why.. thank you for being there.. with love and respect Brenda :)

In knowledge and unification is great strength girl. The pleasure is mine Brenda. Is a privilege to share the flow. Anytime at all. :)

Feed the hunger...drink the ink.

I'm drinking it down Hash.. thank you for putting a smile on my face.. much love Crim :)

thank you kindly Ricky I was wearing my heart or nether regions on my sleeve in this one :) much love Crim

Outraging emotions thru this one changing in each stanza. Luv it! Fantastic ink! :)

thank you lovely Flower.. yes my lust over took the light touch I was thinking of when I started this poem :) with love Crim

thank you kindly Bolt :) much love Crim

Unharnessed desire trapped burning in my own thoughts
Unbridled passion bleeding from lusting wanting knees
Pouting lips pleading please beat your love into me
Rape this whore with your rage ever so tenderly

You have enchanted my thoughts with purety that only comes with true emotional honesty. Thank you

thank you Soul for your sexy poem comment, I always cherish them and for the gracious thoughts on this ink.. much love Crim :)

Sigh worthy steam here Dear Crim!!!
Excellent Ink indeed!!!

thank you kind Soul causing me to smile this morning :) much love Crim

This is hot. You wield words like a sword. I am always moved by your work.

thank you Malki I am always impressed by yours :) with love Crim

liquor in my veins !!!
love it, keep inspiring me (im kinda dry)

thank you Cesar for saying I inspire you been feeling a little dry myself lately :) with love and respect Crim

there is someone somewhere in the world that inspires this kind of admiration in us. we discover it when we venture into these social sites. possibly the only way to touch that person is thru our poetry. it affects all of us,I think.

& it's painful sometimes, but I still want it...

yes I am you're right John though I am inspired by many with this write though written on a singular level :) with love and respect Crim

this poem is exactly what is in my heart right now. thank you

thank you kindly lovely lady I'm pleased you can relate :) much love Crim