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Me between--thoughts illicited from JJJay Against the Wall
Against the wall
Between the hardness of
the wall
and you
I feel myself
Once again...
without
inhibition...
Ready and willing
to try,share, and learn
it all
over and over...
Closing my eyes
to let me
FEEL...
traces of you
are everywhere
at once.
The sounds of
deep bass
and alto moans
mixed in
with the
staccato soprano
notes of surprised
deliciousness..
Finished?
mmmmmmm....
Not with me
between
you
and
the
wall...
It's just beginning
Between the hardness of
the wall
and you
I feel myself
Once again...
without
inhibition...
Ready and willing
to try,share, and learn
it all
over and over...
Closing my eyes
to let me
FEEL...
traces of you
are everywhere
at once.
The sounds of
deep bass
and alto moans
mixed in
with the
staccato soprano
notes of surprised
deliciousness..
Finished?
mmmmmmm....
Not with me
between
you
and
the
wall...
It's just beginning
Published 26th Feb 2014
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27th Feb 2014 2:11am
27th Feb 2014 12:48pm
27th Feb 2014 11:59am
Great flow in this piece sweets!!
Awesome read!!
Ink ON!!!
Sir Lancelott
Come visit
Awesome read!!
Ink ON!!!
Sir Lancelott
Come visit
27th Feb 2014 12:47pm
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14th Mar 2014 8:23pm
Gives whole new meaning to the phrase "Back to the wall"! Nearly say, "Between a rock and a hard place." (Would be most apt if the man were called Peter!)
14th Mar 2014 9:30pm
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31st Mar 2014 5:02pm
ur a lovely poet
who leaves a lot to imagination
well done
continue
stay between the wall and him
for ever
till he cums
and you drain rivers
who leaves a lot to imagination
well done
continue
stay between the wall and him
for ever
till he cums
and you drain rivers
31st Mar 2014 6:27pm
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9th Apr 2014 3:41pm
Excellent!
Not only do I really like this but to think I actually inspired this! Wonderful!
I particularly like the use of sound images --bass, alto, staccato soprano.
Jay
Not only do I really like this but to think I actually inspired this! Wonderful!
I particularly like the use of sound images --bass, alto, staccato soprano.
Jay
9th Apr 2014 3:52pm
16th Apr 2014 6:36am
Lovely! I love the musical aspect & just sexy openness to whomever in this!
Nice & Sweet!!
Nice & Sweet!!
16th Apr 2014 1:58pm
Thanks...I have found some awesome writers here on dup and they have a way of "inspiring" ;)
27th May 2014 12:59pm
27th May 2014 1:28pm
25th Jan 2016 5:37am
The grind of bodies, the vibration of desire, the rhythm of hunger, growling, purring, rubbing, the fierce dance, sandwiched between need and a solid base to keep from sliding away... Walls make the best furniture.
26th Jan 2016 1:17pm
Walls do make the best furniture...so often overlooked or seen otherwise! :)
