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Waiting

The hummingbird is the smallest
she wears a richly jeweled collar with pride.
The flower offers nectar
      and the most delicate of tongues slips out
      of a narrow beak to accept.
Her movements seem so sudden
      her presence so fleeting...
I watch expectantly, waiting for a metaphor to come.
Silly poet, the hummingbird needs no metaphors!
Written by Suoaei
Published | Edited 26th Oct 2015
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