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Arizona Rain
Saturday twisted its spine;
cracked irony's skin.
I have circled the full loop
and met you here
where I thought we'd never be.
It fit and I knew it. Still,
I accepted that it would never be.
Except that it just was.
My obsessive day dream
come true.
And it wasn't what I envisioned at all.
cracked irony's skin.
I have circled the full loop
and met you here
where I thought we'd never be.
It fit and I knew it. Still,
I accepted that it would never be.
Except that it just was.
My obsessive day dream
come true.
And it wasn't what I envisioned at all.
Published 27th Feb 2011
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Good piece, it shot straight into the heart of a recent personal expirience. It is always interesting when you connect with an article of art and you wonder if the creator is writting about you heh Powerful opening line
1st Mar 2011 5:35pm
i love it when that happens. i wrote this in a raw state of mind, fresh out of a personal experience that demanded some immediate form of expression. so thank you for telling me that you can connect with something like this. it means a lot <3
4th May 2011 8:25am
I really enjoyed reading this. I read it a few times just because. Love the opening and closing especially.
