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better than beer in the morning
Patti smith keeps talkin me down
on the old 45
she should have been bigger
than the hole in my roof
sky can be so demanding
recent thunderstorm
attention whore
maybe i don't mind so much
burn it all down if i get too cold
romantic rationale
self fulfilling prophecy
if i don't put it to paper it never happens
i think i'll never speak again
answer the phone with a series of grunts and sighs
this girl knows me better than i do
so we'll just meet in the middle
she's a fucking genius and i've become
a little less predictable
on the old 45
she should have been bigger
than the hole in my roof
sky can be so demanding
recent thunderstorm
attention whore
maybe i don't mind so much
burn it all down if i get too cold
romantic rationale
self fulfilling prophecy
if i don't put it to paper it never happens
i think i'll never speak again
answer the phone with a series of grunts and sighs
this girl knows me better than i do
so we'll just meet in the middle
she's a fucking genius and i've become
a little less predictable
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Re: better than beer in the morning
Anonymous
21st Feb 2014 6:57pm
Patti Smith is the shit!!!
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re: Re: better than beer in the morning
21st Feb 2014 8:53pm
she is qite the muse babe....and how did i know that you would def recognize....hope to see you again soon darlin...
Re: better than beer in the morning
21st Feb 2014 8:24pm
I really like this. Sounds a tad bit like a drunken rant.
Just burn it all down.
Just burn it all down.
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Re: better than beer in the morning
21st Feb 2014 8:55pm
was a completely sober thing actually but some old school folk and a decent morn just reminded me of a special lady....im glad you like young miss...thank you for your praise mam....
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21st Feb 2014 10:04pm
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Re: better than beer in the morning
22nd Feb 2014 8:34am
"she should have been bigger
than the hole in my roof"
I really like this confused-sounding style. Your writing has a captivating rhythm.
Thank you
than the hole in my roof"
I really like this confused-sounding style. Your writing has a captivating rhythm.
Thank you
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22nd Feb 2014 5:07pm
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