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Vanishing Away
I'm vanishing away.
Wondering why I should stay.
There is no point for my life.
So why should I not just die.
All around me is nothing but hate.
And I'm just vanishing away.
Wondering why I should stay.
There is no point for my life.
So why should I not just die.
All around me is nothing but hate.
And I'm just vanishing away.
Published 21st Feb 2014
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2014 4:10am
My heart sinks reading such words that I have felt myself. Deep and emotional write. Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart. Enjoyed! :)
21st Feb 2014 4:14am
most people say they know how one feels but it's not true until you have felt it and/or been through it yourself I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem all my poems are really a piece of my heart I know no other way really to write them but that way
Anonymous
21st Feb 2014 4:38am
Write with blood tears and weeping heart is the best way to write. Keep on letting to of the pain. :)
21st Feb 2014 3:01pm
23rd Mar 2015 9:43pm
I love that serene feeling that emits from this poem.
Sad but Beautiful.
Darker.
Sad but Beautiful.
Darker.
