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Anymore
Once we spoke the same language
I dont understand what you say
Anymore
Once we had the same visions
I dont see what you do
Anymore
Once we heard even the unspoken
I can not listen - you dont tell
Anymore
Once we had a future
Even the now is not real
Anymore
Once so close
We do not know us
Anymore
Once we loved
I do not
Anymore
I dont understand what you say
Anymore
Once we had the same visions
I dont see what you do
Anymore
Once we heard even the unspoken
I can not listen - you dont tell
Anymore
Once we had a future
Even the now is not real
Anymore
Once so close
We do not know us
Anymore
Once we loved
I do not
Anymore
Published 17th Feb 2014
| Edited 18th Feb 2014
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18th Feb 2014 3:51am
Next time try putting the anymore with the sentence instead of separating them. It'll make it better, but nice poem:)
18th Feb 2014 9:36pm
Thank you a lot for the constructive comment.
Well, wanted to have the anymore a bit separated, but placed it now at least closer to the lines.
A compromise ;)
Well, wanted to have the anymore a bit separated, but placed it now at least closer to the lines.
A compromise ;)
