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Five hundred
Five hundred poems dedicated
Five hundred words To speak
Five hundred sonets To sing
Five hundred wishes To come true
Five hundred kisses Awaiting
Dedicated to my love
He knows who he is x
Published 12th Feb 2014
| Edited 1st Mar 2014
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12th Feb 2014 7:38pm
12th Feb 2014 7:44pm
Love is everything
obvious in its wording
Truthful in its meaning
perfect
is there anything better than love?
I don't think there is
imho xD
obvious in its wording
Truthful in its meaning
perfect
is there anything better than love?
I don't think there is
imho xD
12th Feb 2014 7:46pm
12th Feb 2014 7:50pm
Yeah
that and chicken tikka
could be a photo finish
Nutella? Never had it
I'm assuming chocolates ad nuts involved
that and chicken tikka
could be a photo finish
Nutella? Never had it
I'm assuming chocolates ad nuts involved
12th Feb 2014 7:55pm
Probably best you don't...devil food. Pretty much frosting for wheat bread lol
Anonymous
13th Feb 2014 5:11am
I have to agree on the nutella, you have to try it Rose, its heaven in a jar.
13th Feb 2014 6:18am
1st Mar 2014 6:07pm
12th Feb 2014 7:53pm
Love is everything
CHICKEN in its wording
TIKKA in its meaning
perfect NUTELLA
is there anything better than love?
I don't think there is
imho xD
haha
CHICKEN in its wording
TIKKA in its meaning
perfect NUTELLA
is there anything better than love?
I don't think there is
imho xD
haha
12th Feb 2014 7:56pm
naked man fit in body and "length
mine all night to command
or a curry
hmm
one naan
bombay aloo
chicken madras
naked man can come another day
12th Feb 2014 8:06pm
Naked Virgin" old man
maybe ex priest needing to worship another god
then maybe forgo curry night..
xD
any Virgin ex priests out there?
maybe ex priest needing to worship another god
then maybe forgo curry night..
xD
any Virgin ex priests out there?
13th Feb 2014 3:40am
13th Feb 2014 6:19am
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Feb 2014 5:14am
13th Feb 2014 5:12am
The piece is wonderful on love but the conversation about food was the added bonus, thank you Rose.
virgin man?!..hmm, i dont know about that..lol
virgin man?!..hmm, i dont know about that..lol
13th Feb 2014 6:21am
Not young Virgin but middle aged lol
matured like a fine wine but uncorked
hard to find one so pure
impossible I think
matured like a fine wine but uncorked
hard to find one so pure
impossible I think
13th Feb 2014 8:51pm
13th Feb 2014 9:27pm
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
14th Feb 2014 12:06pm
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