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Splatter Canvas
You asked me to paint you
Uncrossed your legs under the table
I never said I'd taint you
But you fit the fucking label
I knew I'd take you for what you had
It's the same old song and dance
Whispered in my ear, you want it bad
Had your hand down in my pants
We can go all night in the dark
Cut the lights and snuff the candles
I'm the type of brush for gentle marks
But I'll fuck you with the handle
You're my splatter canvas, whore
And I'll treat you just as such
Out of breathe, gasp for more
Tell me you like it rough
Beat your skin all shades of red
With streaks and smears of cum
Left you finished on your bed
My masterpiece is done
Uncrossed your legs under the table
I never said I'd taint you
But you fit the fucking label
I knew I'd take you for what you had
It's the same old song and dance
Whispered in my ear, you want it bad
Had your hand down in my pants
We can go all night in the dark
Cut the lights and snuff the candles
I'm the type of brush for gentle marks
But I'll fuck you with the handle
You're my splatter canvas, whore
And I'll treat you just as such
Out of breathe, gasp for more
Tell me you like it rough
Beat your skin all shades of red
With streaks and smears of cum
Left you finished on your bed
My masterpiece is done
Published 12th Feb 2014
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12th Feb 2014 5:38pm
Damn I really like this. Especially...
"I'm the type of brush for gentle marks
But I'll fuck you with the handle"
And the last stanza.
Very creative, awesome title and idea with the spatter canvas, solid ending and good flow.
Well done.
"I'm the type of brush for gentle marks
But I'll fuck you with the handle"
And the last stanza.
Very creative, awesome title and idea with the spatter canvas, solid ending and good flow.
Well done.
12th Feb 2014 5:51pm
Thank you, Circa! I was just testing the water with this one, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
13th Feb 2014 1:57am
This is good stuff!
I'll fuck you with the handle....tell me you like its rough.
Those lines are very appealing to me! I'd love to hear more of this! ;)
I'll fuck you with the handle....tell me you like its rough.
Those lines are very appealing to me! I'd love to hear more of this! ;)
13th Feb 2014 2:21am
Thank you, Madi! Don't worry, I'm cooking up some more material this very moment ;)
