TRAIL

I like this It is neat.

Thank you Mr.K

Nice job, I like this one.

Thank you MrPsycho for walking with me

so glad to be reading you again, whale, you clean lines have been missed.

thanks shadoe yours always enlighten me and thanks for the reading list - wish I could post more but internet not ubiquitous where I've been

Whale, every time I read one of your pieces I get enlightened by the many references of hinduism and culture.  I know that you have such a beautiful gift of weaving wisdom with poetry and I must say not too many poets around du are capable of such.
it's a delight to read your work.

The last two lines are quite intriguing!

Hey Vee - thanks for your careful read - the last two lines are perhaps the last two steps

a brief rest at your poem for further enlightenment, then back to the winding trail...

I love this comment.

Yep - I love this comment as well :)
thanks MrPresident

LOL! :) I get the feeling that JohnF reads ALL poems on DUP, so like a long journey, and then stops a meditative rest at your poem. :)

Haha ;) cool image

It is the path of the mystic!
A gentle introspective poem, Whale ... :)

Thanks for this sip absinthe - I look forward to your next narrative

The trial to inner wisdom and inner peace.

Yes Mourganna - a journey

The trail is the whole... It's easy to forget that, when some elusive destination distracts us. Thanks for the reminder... in poem form!

Yep Atakti - the way is good and the stops intriguing - thanks for stopping

What we have here is [3] tight, potent little pills crafted to elicit thought.

The last two lines is when it hits you that there's much more depth to the chanting rhythm, immediately enticing multiple reads.

Thanks for the stimulating read, whale.

Thanks for this read AC - often we do not know the true purpose of the journey until it ends

Wonderfully written bit o wisdom there whale!
Love it!
Cheers!

Big Thanks SP

Beautiful write. Enjoyed :)

Much appreciated comment Tommie