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Dark or Light
Day by day I try to find a reason to stay I keep having homicidal thoughts i'll probably have them till my body stink's and begins to rott. I know I say it alot but it's truly what I feel. I'm not a liar this is foreal. Although I try to conceal all this pain and sorrow sometimes wishing I wouldn't live too see tomorrow. I feel as if i'm not worthy of living because all I think about is sinning. Seems like my demons are winning but this is only the beginning. When i'm high I feel like my angels are winning but when i'm sober sometimes the devil takes over like a real life game over dark or light I don't know which one to fight or which to invite no matter what path I choose i'll make sure that I never lose.
Published 10th Feb 2014
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Anonymous
7th Apr 2014 4:02am
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12th Apr 2014 4:03pm
9th Jan 2019 9:55pm
Dualism here and i think You've spilled this very well.
I believe all human beings harbor shit like this
and it's only a small percentage of us who actualize
maybe rationalize what we uncover.
(since You asked for honest critique -- I'd try to include punctuation in Your spills. A comma in place can and will change a sentence. I understood the gist of what You spilled, but reading should not be too much work)
I believe all human beings harbor shit like this
and it's only a small percentage of us who actualize
maybe rationalize what we uncover.
(since You asked for honest critique -- I'd try to include punctuation in Your spills. A comma in place can and will change a sentence. I understood the gist of what You spilled, but reading should not be too much work)
