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Sounds of Winter
Does he love me so much that he'd kiss me gently
Would his feathery touch give me chills of excitement
Could he lay with me while the ice moon licks our flesh
As the night melted upon our heated rhythmic bodies
Sounds of winter entangled us
Would his feathery touch give me chills of excitement
Could he lay with me while the ice moon licks our flesh
As the night melted upon our heated rhythmic bodies
Sounds of winter entangled us
Published 8th Feb 2014
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8th Feb 2014 10:23pm
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8th Feb 2014 11:24pm
Very nice Tommie! I love this line, "As the night melted upon our heated rhythmic bodies." Wow! Beautiful!
8th Feb 2014 11:31pm
8th Feb 2014 11:29pm
Beautifully sensual! This passage is so sexy/romantic:
"As the night melted upon our heated rhythmic bodies "
"As the night melted upon our heated rhythmic bodies "
8th Feb 2014 11:33pm
It's been a long cold winter GW! I'm still the devil in disguise but I was feeling a bit romantic today.Thanks for reading and the RL add. :)
8th Feb 2014 11:42pm
I adore your romantic side :) You may have even inspired me to write something...I've been in a slump.
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12th Feb 2014 5:21am
The answer is YES!!! I love you that much Tommie. Now hold me baby, its cold!
12th Feb 2014 1:37pm
