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~We Were Trees~
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We lay entwined at night
planted in different soil
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our roots twisted together
our flesh bowing to touch
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rings of life entice our mouth
we'll be the sweetest of lovers
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We lay entwined at night
planted in different soil
~
our roots twisted together
our flesh bowing to touch
~
rings of life entice our mouth
we'll be the sweetest of lovers
~
Published 5th Feb 2014
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5th Feb 2014 8:55pm
I love this piece, not only because you used my favorite word "entwine," but the tree metaphor is beautiful. Especially the mention of shared roots and the tree rings of life. Bravisima mia bella poeta!
5th Feb 2014 9:16pm
Always enjoy your feed back GW!Thank you for your kind words and the RL add! :)
9th Feb 2014 8:59pm
I see this how ur limbs contort to eachother slowly reaching with an ache to touch wow this is beautiful
9th Feb 2014 9:07pm
I love trees, where I live I see 'tree people ' all the time, it's like a sweet romantic tree dance...making love!Thank you BS for your sweet words. :)
