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Twin face
Twin face
There are two sides
to any woman
first is sweet nothing words
they love
and
oooo and coooooo
then the physical side
of women
sexy men stand always to attention
and
wish they were perpetually washed
in welcome rain
as women's does drain
when lain
and
men feel slain
but happily not in vain
as love flows down
their burning veins
they stand up soon
again and again
and
yet again
says this blasted again
burning fountain of brew
but better than cold dew
There are two sides
to any woman
first is sweet nothing words
they love
and
oooo and coooooo
then the physical side
of women
sexy men stand always to attention
and
wish they were perpetually washed
in welcome rain
as women's does drain
when lain
and
men feel slain
but happily not in vain
as love flows down
their burning veins
they stand up soon
again and again
and
yet again
says this blasted again
burning fountain of brew
but better than cold dew
Published 3rd Feb 2014
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Anonymous
3rd Feb 2014 5:52pm
Ha! Good write! Glad you luv a woman for all that she is. :)
3rd Feb 2014 6:03pm
yeah i am straight
u have been too quick
in replying this
thanks friend your poetry is decent
now so is mine
no???
u have been too quick
in replying this
thanks friend your poetry is decent
now so is mine
no???
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Feb 2014 11:23pm
3rd Feb 2014 10:50pm
My poetry is decent? LOL!!!! That's better than sucks I guess. You're poems are good or I wouldn't come by. You have to have to realize I've criticized for my comments of not getting what people mean....so I'm a little hesitant at times. Sorry! Keep on inking. :)
4th Feb 2014 00:12am
You're poems are good or I wouldn't come by.
I do take it as a compliment
you are the flower
among many a poetic bud
worth a gem
in your own way
thanks for coming my way
you make me compose poetry
straightaway
you are the flower
I the butterfly
we both supplement each other
but your poetry
is much,much better
I do take it as a compliment
you are the flower
among many a poetic bud
worth a gem
in your own way
thanks for coming my way
you make me compose poetry
straightaway
you are the flower
I the butterfly
we both supplement each other
but your poetry
is much,much better
Anonymous
4th Feb 2014 1:09am
Don't you see? Don't compare yourself with anyone else....it will eat you alive. Trust me....I know first hand. It makes no difference who's better than who. What makes your poems great is that you write them with YOU. Your way, your personality, your heart, your soul, your own expressions. Write what your heart speaks and tears cry. If you write a dark poem....you should feel the goosebumps. Write sad poem....the page should be wet by your own tears. Write a sexy poem....you should be tuned on and feel every line yourself. Sounds like you are being bullied.....if you are PM me and we will sort this out right quick. F......them!!! LOL!!!!! :)
4th Feb 2014 1:26am
NO bastard ...sorry
has yet been born
to gap me
no man
no woman
to slap me
I am me
and produce what comes out of my genes
I am the source
to fill heavens ravines
it means
I can stand for long
as ever before
hold ones hand
oh never
I have my own orchard of Eden
if any Adam wants to enter
let him come
I fear none
as long as I can
as much as I do
stand
let any
ONE HOLD MY STANDING third HAND
I''support em
thanks
has yet been born
to gap me
no man
no woman
to slap me
I am me
and produce what comes out of my genes
I am the source
to fill heavens ravines
it means
I can stand for long
as ever before
hold ones hand
oh never
I have my own orchard of Eden
if any Adam wants to enter
let him come
I fear none
as long as I can
as much as I do
stand
let any
ONE HOLD MY STANDING third HAND
I''support em
thanks
3rd Feb 2014 7:06pm
You seem to like both her verbal and emotional side as well as her physicsal expressiveness -- not a bad combo if you ask me. At least that is how I am reading it......
:)
:)
3rd Feb 2014 7:37pm
what else is a woman… but a reflection ….of the sun… as a moon …that's why women get moody so soon… then the warmth up from heaven ….as by sun’s rays are given ….women have always taken ….the longer one …and after submission …have given a wash of the cream…. of heaven …and so men burn within…. for more…. tis to be taken…. love of a woman…. is given only to some…. not everyone… if so she is a whore …no woman …. do you agree …or let's agree to disagree..you remain a woman..unlike me…
