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THE DAY AFTER, VALENTINE'S DAY
THE DAY AFTER, VALENTINE'S DAY
Theirs no better day
Then the day after St. Valentine's Day
When the price of love
Is discounted 60% below
Than the price marked above
When you can walk through the door
With flowers and candy in hand
Without becoming a poor
Pathetic young man
So take heed dear lads
Listen closely to my advice
The only way say you love her
Is at less than half price
Theirs no better day
Then the day after St. Valentine's Day
When the price of love
Is discounted 60% below
Than the price marked above
When you can walk through the door
With flowers and candy in hand
Without becoming a poor
Pathetic young man
So take heed dear lads
Listen closely to my advice
The only way say you love her
Is at less than half price
Published 3rd Feb 2014
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3rd Feb 2014 4:26pm
8th Feb 2014 5:48am
8th Feb 2014 5:48pm
Welcome Snugglebuck. Your writing has it's very own identity. Well Done!
19th Apr 2014 11:05pm
I looked specifically at the titles to find another humorous work, and sure enough, I found one. You've got me geeking, dude. Good job.
17th Feb 2015 7:30am
lmao! ... I just wrote the same freakin piece a few days ago ... Great minds as they say!
17th Jun 2015 2:05am
I wrote a poem called Valentines Day
I guarantee it will piss any woman
who reads it off to the max
but its only about humor to me
but women don't see with my eyes
I guarantee it will piss any woman
who reads it off to the max
but its only about humor to me
but women don't see with my eyes
