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'Far-Cited Vision'
Near sighted,
I start
to
lose it
when I
see
shadows
in the sky
bone
numbing visions
chasing
possibilities' child
dancing
across
a spectrum
of
seeded
memories
entwined
in fabled tales
of
'light...'
I start
to
lose it
when I
see
shadows
in the sky
bone
numbing visions
chasing
possibilities' child
dancing
across
a spectrum
of
seeded
memories
entwined
in fabled tales
of
'light...'
Published 3rd Feb 2014
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3rd Feb 2014 3:55pm
powerful with just a few words... you're outstanding in the craft... The imagery is stunning...:)
Aaaaawwww, you you yooouuuuuu
C'mere n let me kiss that sweet mouth! lol
Thank you my dear! :)
C'mere n let me kiss that sweet mouth! lol
Thank you my dear! :)
3rd Feb 2014 4:20pm
3rd Feb 2014 4:25pm
Aaaawww my sweet Mami! Gosh u make me blush... Thank you always sweetness :)
4th Feb 2014 8:11pm
5th Feb 2014 5:07am
Thank you my dear, I'm happy you enjoyed n always grateful for your sweet support :)
5th Feb 2014 1:56am
So much strength in this lovely piece! I'm always a wee bit intrigued with what conjure your pen to write pieces like this. Whatever it is, I love it.....
5th Feb 2014 5:12am
It's got strength becuz I eat my wheaties! lol... Seriously though, I'm pleased you liked this n more so because
I adore you n your continued support :)
I adore you n your continued support :)
6th Feb 2014 12:48pm
How am I inlove with the way yew create humor with words......... Like lies at the tip of my tongue...... "I love your piece"
6th Feb 2014 1:03pm
Thank you, although I'm unsure how you saw this as humorous I still appreciate your thoughts n time :)
