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she sits and wonders how the person
she loved more than anything in the world
has put her in the position of
losing
everything
leaving her hands overflowing
with responsibility to
take care of all
while he sits somewhere far away
as usual
she loved more than anything in the world
has put her in the position of
losing
everything
leaving her hands overflowing
with responsibility to
take care of all
while he sits somewhere far away
as usual
Published 1st Feb 2014
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1st Feb 2014 1:54am
I liked this because it was simple but heartbreaking. I feel like you are one of the poets i call Truth poets. The ones who do not hold back with showing what they think
5th Feb 2014 1:42am
Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your kind thoughts…Truth Poet..I Love that!
1st Feb 2014 2:16am
Damn that fucker needs his ass whipped!!sorry sweets!!
Great write and made me mad too read!!
Awesome ink sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write and made me mad too read!!
Awesome ink sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
5th Feb 2014 1:43am
Anonymous
1st Feb 2014 2:36am
good poem,and sad to say for all too many a sad reality.
5th Feb 2014 1:44am
1st Feb 2014 3:50pm
5th Feb 2014 1:46am
If not, it is really no longer my concern…just putting the pedal to the metal, before he decides to interrupt my life again..Thank You love! ox
1st Feb 2014 7:10pm
I hope this is just your brilliant mind at work, creating imaginative ink, and not real....Xo
5th Feb 2014 1:48am
