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Precum
your gorgeous cock
hard and solid as a rock
precum from your slit
oh how I love to lick
from the bottom or the top
any position
with you I can't stop
I want you inside
I am ready to ride ;)
hard and solid as a rock
precum from your slit
oh how I love to lick
from the bottom or the top
any position
with you I can't stop
I want you inside
I am ready to ride ;)
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Re: Precut
30th Jan 2014 6:58am
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30th Jan 2014 8:11am
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31st Jan 2014 00:58am
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30th Jan 2014 2:01pm
....right to the *point* of the matter Scarlet : )
Something quite arousing about seeing his arousal at your hand, isn't it? That clear nectar is such a work of art......
Something quite arousing about seeing his arousal at your hand, isn't it? That clear nectar is such a work of art......
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re: Re: Precum
31st Jan 2014 1:03am
I see you are understanding exactly what I was trying to say.....
Indeed very arousing to witness his arousal in that way --
Very delectable too...... ;)
Indeed very arousing to witness his arousal in that way --
Very delectable too...... ;)
Re: Precum
the pre-drop
speaks for itself
the taste will be worth
the relish...
let me in now
weeps
the greatest ivory one
this side of Eden
let me in
and
let me feel
the softness
insides
of your awesome
red tush valley
as you peel
and
a fountain of warm juices
mine does reveal
and
wine does not compare
no better
than what I'd love to share
enjoy with me
from mylongish tumbler
as you make my ego
humbler!
smiles!
speaks for itself
the taste will be worth
the relish...
let me in now
weeps
the greatest ivory one
this side of Eden
let me in
and
let me feel
the softness
insides
of your awesome
red tush valley
as you peel
and
a fountain of warm juices
mine does reveal
and
wine does not compare
no better
than what I'd love to share
enjoy with me
from mylongish tumbler
as you make my ego
humbler!
smiles!
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re: Re: Precum
31st Jan 2014 1:06am
Wow!
This reply is a poem in and of itself and I am flattered that you took the time to write something to beautiful in response to my poem. Thank you!!! :)
This reply is a poem in and of itself and I am flattered that you took the time to write something to beautiful in response to my poem. Thank you!!! :)
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you gave the seminal
fluidic inspiration
for this final one
thanks ung one
since also published comments some////
fluidic inspiration
for this final one
thanks ung one
since also published comments some////
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31st Jan 2014 5:01am
I am honored that my poem was
seminal fluidic inspiration for you....
Isn't that the purpose of erotica....?
Thank you once again -- I am equally
as inspired by fellow poets such as yourself!!! :) ;)
seminal fluidic inspiration for you....
Isn't that the purpose of erotica....?
Thank you once again -- I am equally
as inspired by fellow poets such as yourself!!! :) ;)
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31st Jan 2014 3:14pm
so grateful you bear the heat
I so produce
to in erotics to help
poetry you produce
thanks to you
do induce
I so produce
to in erotics to help
poetry you produce
thanks to you
do induce
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re: Re: Precum
31st Jan 2014 5:15am
Thank you so much........
I want to start writing more erotica again and comments like yours, make it all worthwhile..... :)
I want to start writing more erotica again and comments like yours, make it all worthwhile..... :)
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31st Jan 2014 5:47am
Re: Precum
31st Jan 2014 5:27am
Oh my goodness!! lol this was smoking hot!!
N wow, you'd do it anyway?! lol mmmmm
it's HARD to think anything more pleasant lol
Excellent ink sexy one :)
N wow, you'd do it anyway?! lol mmmmm
it's HARD to think anything more pleasant lol
Excellent ink sexy one :)
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Re: Precum
Thank you for your praise..... I am really happy you liked it and thought it was sexy.... ;)
Re: Precum
4th Feb 2014 1:53am
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Anonymous
24th Feb 2014 5:15pm
Scarlet, this simple poem had such an effect on me. This piece of erotica is undeniably hot and sinfully seductive. My favorite line:
Oh how I love to lick
From the bottom or from the top
What an intense and steamy visual. You are getting a standing ovation from me!
Oh how I love to lick
From the bottom or from the top
What an intense and steamy visual. You are getting a standing ovation from me!
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re: Re: Precum
25th Feb 2014 3:18am
Wow! A standing ovation.... I feel very honored and flattered..... The fact that this poem has moved you the way it has, gives me great pleasure... ;) Thank for your praise! ♡♡♡
Re: Precum
14th Mar 2014 10:09pm
Short and simple yet bursting with heat the imagery is just steamy love it ;D
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