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I, Cynic...
Upon hearing
the 'Proclamation'
of love
there lives
a silent scream...
embroidered near
the arc of the larynx,
as it scrapes feverishly
on the cells
of freedom
scavenging
the rarest breathes
of hope...
though,
the comparative
equal to
it's endeavor
recognizes
that futility...
basks in the glory
of it's penultimate
truth...
*Penultimate-next to last-i.e. There may be 'other'
truths preceding...
Just thought I'd clarify any confusions :)
the 'Proclamation'
of love
there lives
a silent scream...
embroidered near
the arc of the larynx,
as it scrapes feverishly
on the cells
of freedom
scavenging
the rarest breathes
of hope...
though,
the comparative
equal to
it's endeavor
recognizes
that futility...
basks in the glory
of it's penultimate
truth...
*Penultimate-next to last-i.e. There may be 'other'
truths preceding...
Just thought I'd clarify any confusions :)
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Re: I, Cynic...
29th Jan 2014 5:48pm
re: Re: I, Cynic...
29th Jan 2014 6:11pm
Re: I, Cynic...
29th Jan 2014 6:39pm
"embroidered near
the arc of the larynx,
as it scrapes feverishly
on the cells
of freedom"<---ahhh, poetic perfection in this stanza...
The entire poem is poetry in motion! Xo
the arc of the larynx,
as it scrapes feverishly
on the cells
of freedom"<---ahhh, poetic perfection in this stanza...
The entire poem is poetry in motion! Xo
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re: Re: I, Cynic...
30th Jan 2014 12:59pm
Aaaaawwww my sweet Rain, I thank you! Such a loving soul
and faithful supporter, I'm indebted to you :)
and faithful supporter, I'm indebted to you :)
Re: I, Cynic...
30th Jan 2014 8:05am
Agree with RainC - that was my favourite part, I can feel it in my throat...
Perfect!
x
Perfect!
x
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re: Re: I, Cynic...
30th Jan 2014 1:01pm
Heart, bless you, you sweetheart! Thank you sooooo much
I'm happy you enjoyed this ink n grateful for your support :)
I'm happy you enjoyed this ink n grateful for your support :)
Re: I, Cynic...
Agree with RainC and Heart of Glass. That stanza makes my flesh crawl so very poetical it comes along. Your words make me want to get them past my larynx for shouting them out loud. Brilliant, Poe.
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re: Re: I, Cynic...
30th Jan 2014 1:03pm
Oh, a lil tough getting them down?
Then may I offer you a glass of water? lol
Jk... Thank you my dear, I'm truly grateful for your unending support my sexy one :)
Then may I offer you a glass of water? lol
Jk... Thank you my dear, I'm truly grateful for your unending support my sexy one :)
re: re: Re: I, Cynic...
30th Jan 2014 11:38pm
Re: I, Cynic...
30th Jan 2014 6:43pm
"embroidered near
the arc of the larynx,
as it scrapes feverishly
on the cells of freedom"
poetic shivers down my spine Poe, this is steller ink
the arc of the larynx,
as it scrapes feverishly
on the cells of freedom"
poetic shivers down my spine Poe, this is steller ink
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re: Re: I, Cynic...
31st Jan 2014 00:40am
Anytime I get your seal of approval
I feel like I'm gonna float away lol
Thank you Mami, truly sweet you are n I'm grateful always for your support :)
I feel like I'm gonna float away lol
Thank you Mami, truly sweet you are n I'm grateful always for your support :)