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Re: Day/Night
29th Jan 2014 2:20pm
re: Re: Day/Night
29th Jan 2014 2:22pm
table for one...I like that(sadly)....lol...Always a pleasure getting your feedback PS, thank you so much. :)
Re: Day/Night
Anonymous
29th Jan 2014 4:34pm
Interesting dichotomy. Sometimes it seems relationships are like two sides of the world: never day and night at the same time. Cool idea and choice delivery Tommie.
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re: Re: Day/Night
29th Jan 2014 11:37pm
Re: Day/Night
29th Jan 2014 5:10pm
U R DAY
HE NIGHT
U KEEP AWAKE
HE SLEEPS
THEN FOLLOW SUIT
THE TWIN WILL NEVER MEET
DAY AND NIGHT
IN BETWEEN THE SHEET
OF LOVE
AND
DESPERATION
MILES
BETWIXT
HE NIGHT
U KEEP AWAKE
HE SLEEPS
THEN FOLLOW SUIT
THE TWIN WILL NEVER MEET
DAY AND NIGHT
IN BETWEEN THE SHEET
OF LOVE
AND
DESPERATION
MILES
BETWIXT
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Re: Day/Night
29th Jan 2014 9:57pm
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29th Jan 2014 11:38pm
Re: Day/Night
Anonymous
29th Jan 2014 10:27pm
stikkee fingurs lol Rm
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re: Re: Day/Night
29th Jan 2014 11:39pm
Re: Day/Night
30th Jan 2014 7:20am