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hound of the choir
his gravelly bay cloaks us
we hunt for our souls
Written by
LobodeSanPedro
Published
28th Jan 2014
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
28th Jan 2014 6:06pm
I love the dark and haunting atmosphere you evoke with those lines.
'we hunt for our souls' - that gives me goose-bumps.
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LobodeSanPedro
29th Jan 2014 9:00am
Thank you for the comment and expressing the emotion it evokes for you ... You sparked another (5) beat line for another piece ... "darkness in the light"
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rain1courtel
(RainC)
28th Jan 2014 9:43pm
...intriguing piece Pedro! Xo
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LobodeSanPedro
29th Jan 2014 8:56am
Thanks Rain ... It was written during a moment of somber reflection
xo
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DarkEnchantress
28th Jan 2014 11:13pm
C H I L L S !!
Such a compelling piece...a tale to be told in deepest midnite!
(made me think of the "Hound of the Bskervilles"):)
Appreciated the delicious darkness of your lines!
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LobodeSanPedro
29th Jan 2014 8:54am
In reading your comment - I can practically see the fog on the moor ... I loved watching the old b&w movie on television as a kid
Thanks for the read
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