Could?

I am. You are. I can be and yes. Absolutely. XO

You're beautiful TS. Thank you. XO

sweet sentiment

reads like a country and  western lullaby

nice Tommie

You're right..it does..Thank you PS for reading. :)

I think so and other people will think so too why not

glen...thank you for your kind words. :)

Love it short and beautiful.

Thank you LD, much appreciated. :)

your experienced past
is the foundation stone
of ur diligence

Thanks A. :)

Beautiful flow, loved this x

Thank you Heart. :)

Love this poem Tommie. :)

I just read a short poem by Heart_of _Glass and after reading it line by line, I read it as a picture, pulling together different words from different lines. I did this with your wonderful poem too: "crazy fire and light colorful feathered loneliness"

It's a revelation to me reading poems subsequent times like pictures where the words flow together under a single gaze.

Much appreciated Jswiss, I love when a write does that for me...I'm glad mine can do that for you.Thank you :)

So Sweet,  n it sounds like you found someone...
Lucky bastard lol

Thanks for reading poetikmind. :)