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27th Jan 2014 8:51pm
27th Jan 2014 9:12pm
Thanks again, again :-).
A Queen's Bed in a Kingdom of Love,
that's stylish.
And a haystack in the shack.
Not too bad either ...
We have to make the best of it!
A Queen's Bed in a Kingdom of Love,
that's stylish.
And a haystack in the shack.
Not too bad either ...
We have to make the best of it!
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27th Jan 2014 8:55pm
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27th Jan 2014 9:14pm
Thank you so much, Gabriel!
Would perhaps have chosen different words if it
wasn't for the 17 syllables a senryu requires.
But I'm glad you think they fit!
Would perhaps have chosen different words if it
wasn't for the 17 syllables a senryu requires.
But I'm glad you think they fit!
Uhuh, seems like I have to be very watchful with my wording :-), Hashman. You are pulling my leg :-)!
27th Jan 2014 11:01pm
Thanks a lot, Speak. To the point I want the poems to be. Your kind comment is much appreciated!
27th Jan 2014 11:30pm
What a funny and sad tale in 17.
King Richard: My kingdom for a horse.
Chiyo: The horse makes a hole a kingdom/femdom (if you prefer).
King Richard: My kingdom for a horse.
Chiyo: The horse makes a hole a kingdom/femdom (if you prefer).
27th Jan 2014 11:49pm
This sentence I've already heard twice today: My kingdom for a horse :-).
Femdom does not sound bad :-).
Thanks a lot, Semaj, for stopping by and reading me.
Femdom does not sound bad :-).
Thanks a lot, Semaj, for stopping by and reading me.
27th Jan 2014 11:37pm
28th Jan 2014 00:24am
28th Jan 2014 00:39am
A hide out, in together we'd shout
Pleasures galore, in unison
pleading...more, more' Lol
Nice ink C! :)
Pleasures galore, in unison
pleading...more, more' Lol
Nice ink C! :)
28th Jan 2014 00:45am
Ah! I like your continuance, Poe! That's what happens, or should happen, in hide outs :-).
Thanks a lot for your sexy comment!
Thanks a lot for your sexy comment!
28th Jan 2014 1:32am
28th Jan 2014 10:02am
Thanks a lot, Twitch! Yes, our comfort always depends on the ones we're with. Love your wording:
[...]turn the bland to beauty [...]
The fan I'd like to return :-).
[...]turn the bland to beauty [...]
The fan I'd like to return :-).
28th Jan 2014 1:18pm
Love all the responses...pretty much says it all...
enjoyed this my dear Iris...:) ox
enjoyed this my dear Iris...:) ox
28th Jan 2014 1:36pm
And I love your kind words as well, JeJe! Good to count you among my friends *hugz*. xo
30th Jan 2014 12:52pm
Very nice Senryu Miss C ... it grew on me ... the double meanings ... the passion ... depth
30th Jan 2014 1:07pm
I'm utterly glad that you know what I wanted to convey. Thank you so much for your very welcome comment, Spanker!
Anonymous
30th Jan 2014 7:06pm
I thought this was a write with irony and wit, you always have a tiny surprise in your writing!
30th Jan 2014 8:08pm
Liz, I'm sorry to have to disappoint you. This piece was just meant to say what it says :-(. But I'm glad that you think my writing holds tiny surprises! Thank you so much!
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