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Getting the Message across
2am I climbed in
freezing cold
Drifting out of sleep
my tired man
I took your arm
moving it around me like a blanket
Moving back into a spooning embrace
Taking my cold full on
Exchanging mine with your heat
"How was your night baby"
In your best sleepy voice
"Need warming up" i whispered
"My nights not over just yet"
Waiting as i spooned against him
waiting to feel him
hoping the message got through
I wasn't disappointed. .
freezing cold
Drifting out of sleep
my tired man
I took your arm
moving it around me like a blanket
Moving back into a spooning embrace
Taking my cold full on
Exchanging mine with your heat
"How was your night baby"
In your best sleepy voice
"Need warming up" i whispered
"My nights not over just yet"
Waiting as i spooned against him
waiting to feel him
hoping the message got through
I wasn't disappointed. .
Published 26th Jan 2014
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27th Jan 2014 3:51am
27th Jan 2014 6:18am
Yes agreed
though if he's cold
then it's not reciprocated
lol
he warms up first
it's in the small print
though if he's cold
then it's not reciprocated
lol
he warms up first
it's in the small print
Anonymous
27th Jan 2014 4:43pm
It's always comforting to know that some messages are heard and understood effortlessly.
Now that's a beautiful relationship!
Now that's a beautiful relationship!
27th Jan 2014 5:10pm
27th Jan 2014 5:59pm
I wish I could remember how this felt
alas just my I
Ago ation takes me there...a beautiful, dreamy scenerio :)
alas just my I
Ago ation takes me there...a beautiful, dreamy scenerio :)
27th Jan 2014 6:40pm
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