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No Words~
She wanted his crazy to be held
in his shadowy lines without words
She wanted him to shape her mind
with his beautiful haunting silence
in his shadowy lines without words
She wanted him to shape her mind
with his beautiful haunting silence
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25th Jan 2014 10:00pm
dat's anuther won wurth readin roach
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25th Jan 2014 10:41pm
Tommie I'm going to run out of ways to compliment your writing! As Always, a pleasure to read your words. I'm going to have to take a day off to read as much of your prior work as possible. :)
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25th Jan 2014 11:38pm
Thank you so much for your wonderful words Jswiss.I truly appreciate you reading me. :)
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I need to break silence to blurt out "Well Done Tommie!!!" I'll shut up now... I am once again the strong-jawed, cleft-chinned silent type :)
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26th Jan 2014 12:53pm
At first I wasn't sure that my silence had turned you in so much, but NOW!? I so flattered lol
Seriously, this was outstanding my sweet lady :)
Seriously, this was outstanding my sweet lady :)
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Best comment ever...thank you VERY much Twitch, I'm so glad you got this. XO