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Shadow Boxing
Held up against the ropes
Flexing with their give
Keep throwing your verbal punches
Tiring, your heart will be cooperative.
I’m not going to move
bucket spitting, get it out
Sweating as you exert yourself
Calmly matching you bout for bout.
Keep on shadow boxing
I won’t come undone
Keep on shadow boxing
Smiling softly, you'll be won.
You’ll not feel my burn
Nor the afterglow sting
Please lay your demons to rest
After this hit, take a jab not a swing.
Keep on shadow boxing
I won’t come undone
Keep on shadow boxing
Smiling softly, you'll be won.
Unlace your gloves
let them fall to the ground
the bell has gone...
gently finish this round...
Keep on shadow boxing
I won’t come undone...
Flexing with their give
Keep throwing your verbal punches
Tiring, your heart will be cooperative.
I’m not going to move
bucket spitting, get it out
Sweating as you exert yourself
Calmly matching you bout for bout.
Keep on shadow boxing
I won’t come undone
Keep on shadow boxing
Smiling softly, you'll be won.
You’ll not feel my burn
Nor the afterglow sting
Please lay your demons to rest
After this hit, take a jab not a swing.
Keep on shadow boxing
I won’t come undone
Keep on shadow boxing
Smiling softly, you'll be won.
Unlace your gloves
let them fall to the ground
the bell has gone...
gently finish this round...
Keep on shadow boxing
I won’t come undone...
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Re: Shadow Boxing
23rd Jan 2014 00:26am
I can feel the bass beat in this one.
Strong defiant write.
Heart has no glass jaw, she won't be undone.
Good message. Like your power and control.
xo
Strong defiant write.
Heart has no glass jaw, she won't be undone.
Good message. Like your power and control.
xo
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re: Re: Shadow Boxing
23rd Jan 2014 6:07am
I wanted the sound to be strong and deep, secure.
Yes control... mmm.
Thank you as usual Sir for commenting... I liked the glass jaw reference xo
Yes control... mmm.
Thank you as usual Sir for commenting... I liked the glass jaw reference xo
Re: Shadow Boxing
23rd Jan 2014 1:21am
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23rd Jan 2014 6:41am
Why thank you! It's what it feels like... hurdles.
Really appreciate your visit x
Really appreciate your visit x
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23rd Jan 2014 1:33am
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23rd Jan 2014 3:07am
I love the boxing motif...it's easy to visualize. Well done Heart :)
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23rd Jan 2014 6:44am
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Re: Shadow Boxing
23rd Jan 2014 3:44am
aww....heart, you do have a gift of writing such beautiful songs that tell a wonderful story.
'Keep on Shawdow Boxing'<--that throws a sharp punch! :) Me likes, me likes a lot...Xo
'Keep on Shawdow Boxing'<--that throws a sharp punch! :) Me likes, me likes a lot...Xo
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re: Re: Shadow Boxing
23rd Jan 2014 6:46am
Thank you Rain, I write how I feel and try not to sound repetitive... lovely of you to follow and comment xo
Re: Shadow Boxing
23rd Jan 2014 4:16am
Shadow boxing won't save anyone from a sweet, patient love like u have! ... Love this :)
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re: Re: Shadow Boxing
23rd Jan 2014 6:47am
hehe yes, I'm hoping to wear the muse down. Obviously you guys will know how I go. You make me smile Poe, thank you for being so kind x
Re: Shadow Boxing
23rd Jan 2014 7:13am
This write is very engaging as I can read it in at least two ways. If I thought I could do it justice, I would be the first to offer my attempt at providing an acoustic guitar to match with the lyrics.
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24th Jan 2014 1:28am
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Re: Shadow Boxing
26th Jan 2014 1:09am
Wow i love how you beat me up with this word tht just jabbed me with how u created this i love it
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3rd Feb 2014 6:57am
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26th Jan 2014 10:33pm
I read this one again, more than once. Really love your writing. Even your comments: "the endless matches of hesitation."
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3rd Feb 2014 6:58am