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hard
on your back at the beach
behind the veil of neon red
eye lids, electric from the
zenith sun sitting on your simmering
face, sweat drips in every crease of your
symmetry, the curves of you make
the earth a hard place to breath
behind the veil of neon red
eye lids, electric from the
zenith sun sitting on your simmering
face, sweat drips in every crease of your
symmetry, the curves of you make
the earth a hard place to breath
Published 22nd Jan 2014
| Edited 7th Feb 2014
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23rd Jan 2014 2:04am
There's eight inches of snow outside my window ... Thank you for this
LSP
LSP
25th Jan 2014 4:16am
23rd Jan 2014 11:16am
25th Jan 2014 4:17am
23rd Jan 2014 12:54pm
Same beach a few months later, and it's just seaweed and seagulls.
But yeah, good capture of a sizzling hot day!
But yeah, good capture of a sizzling hot day!
25th Jan 2014 4:18am
23rd Jan 2014 1:34pm
eye re'late some how....
as
every day is 'my' beach......
seaweed,seagulls,etc....all wholly holy in thee
deep holes of
MyMind........
25th Jan 2014 1:57am
I found this piece to be sexy and beautiful!
"dripping in every crease of your symmetry"
^^^^killer line! :)
Love this...Xo
"dripping in every crease of your symmetry"
^^^^killer line! :)
Love this...Xo
25th Jan 2014 4:27am
Thanks rain, the goddess whose symmetries make others sweat. I kinda like that line too. Puts a few extra mmm's in the parabolic curves of the body beautiful.
4th Mar 2014 6:17am
4th Mar 2014 9:12pm
