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~Death is Peaceful~
My world again is coming down all around me
falling apart at the seams
so much is going wrong
at least thats what it seems
even with the help of the razor
my frustrations and anger will not cease
I'm praying to the heavens
god please take me
I would like to become an angel
at least then I might find peace
the darkened caverns of a coffin
may be my only release
falling apart at the seams
so much is going wrong
at least thats what it seems
even with the help of the razor
my frustrations and anger will not cease
I'm praying to the heavens
god please take me
I would like to become an angel
at least then I might find peace
the darkened caverns of a coffin
may be my only release
Published 16th Feb 2011
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Nina please don't choose the razor..I know I do things to release pain and anger too that aren't good for me..and your already an angel here on Earth..write it out as your doing in an excellent way..peace Crim
16th Feb 2011 8:31pm
18th Feb 2011 1:04am
ur poem is great it was the frist one i read on this wesute keep going i wanna read more
18th Feb 2011 3:31am
11th Aug 2012 1:00am
creepy, n soft! good emotion! lots of manic fear inside! a bit bumpie but can be worked over in song no doubt! keep grindin
