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The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
...Reasoning got wind that Substance
was recently spotted in a nightclub
and occupying an apartment in a well
known shady area way across the other
side of town.
She decided that until she knew for sure,
that she'd keep quiet about it, so as not
to have Questions giving her the third
degree on how and when she learned of
his whereabouts.
Knowing he wasn't very pleased with his
'former' friend she reasoned it was the
best approach.
Questions, though was quite perceptive,
and when he gazed at Reasoning in eyes
he knew right away they held stories that
he could only imagine, of course that made
him feel insane inside because questions
always tormented him when there seemed
to be no logical answers anywhere.
"Wonder what's running through her head
THIS TIME" he thought unnervingly to himself.
It was a week ago to the very day, Substance had
what he felt was the most despicable event to happen
to him in quite some time. Recalling the mess he got
caught up in at a fairly popular club all because of his
shaky alliance with Bullshit. Whom as he used to tell
everyone he knew that, "Bullshit will take a mofo for
a ride, and had no scruples about doing it either."
He made him think more intensely about where he
was headed in life and more importantly who did
he want to entrust with helping him get there?
Then 'she' appeared in his closed eye...
Reasoning, she was someone he felt would
always give him a reason to smile.
Problem with that though, according to
a conversation he once had with this dude
he met called Expectation is she was already
another's significant other.
Life just seemed to twist him in
too many knots, far too ofen he fumed to
himself, while staring into the blue of morn.
At that very moment Bullshit was coming
up the block, and along with him was two
figures that were all too familiar to him,
Krunch and Munch.
"Oh Damn!" Substance huffed,
"I really ain't trying to deal with no Bullshit today... !
was recently spotted in a nightclub
and occupying an apartment in a well
known shady area way across the other
side of town.
She decided that until she knew for sure,
that she'd keep quiet about it, so as not
to have Questions giving her the third
degree on how and when she learned of
his whereabouts.
Knowing he wasn't very pleased with his
'former' friend she reasoned it was the
best approach.
Questions, though was quite perceptive,
and when he gazed at Reasoning in eyes
he knew right away they held stories that
he could only imagine, of course that made
him feel insane inside because questions
always tormented him when there seemed
to be no logical answers anywhere.
"Wonder what's running through her head
THIS TIME" he thought unnervingly to himself.
It was a week ago to the very day, Substance had
what he felt was the most despicable event to happen
to him in quite some time. Recalling the mess he got
caught up in at a fairly popular club all because of his
shaky alliance with Bullshit. Whom as he used to tell
everyone he knew that, "Bullshit will take a mofo for
a ride, and had no scruples about doing it either."
He made him think more intensely about where he
was headed in life and more importantly who did
he want to entrust with helping him get there?
Then 'she' appeared in his closed eye...
Reasoning, she was someone he felt would
always give him a reason to smile.
Problem with that though, according to
a conversation he once had with this dude
he met called Expectation is she was already
another's significant other.
Life just seemed to twist him in
too many knots, far too ofen he fumed to
himself, while staring into the blue of morn.
At that very moment Bullshit was coming
up the block, and along with him was two
figures that were all too familiar to him,
Krunch and Munch.
"Oh Damn!" Substance huffed,
"I really ain't trying to deal with no Bullshit today... !
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Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
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22nd Jan 2014 8:37pm
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22nd Jan 2014 9:24pm
Why thank you Dirt! Truly appreciate your enthused
response to my ink... :)
response to my ink... :)
Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
22nd Jan 2014 9:31pm
Lol you are just one of my favorite story tellers, I have missed out on so much Poe!! Love it!
Red
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re: Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 1:16am
N you my favorite Redheaded hot poetess ! lol thank you my dear Gypsy, mucho appreciato :)
Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 00:53am
oooo I like the characters so much and the tribulations!!!
Can't wait for your next piece x
Can't wait for your next piece x
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re: Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 1:18am
Aaaawww well IF you'd like, I have several other pieces on this story here in my archives, you can catch up on :) n thanks a ton my sweetness :)
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Anonymous
23rd Jan 2014 4:15am
You are the best at these writes. Actually anything you write is the best. Enjoyed! :)
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23rd Jan 2014 11:12am
Aaaaaawwww listen to you, you sweetie pie!
Thank you so much, I'm humbled n deeply grateful
for your continued support my friend :)
Thank you so much, I'm humbled n deeply grateful
for your continued support my friend :)
Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 4:59am
Bro. P this is an awesome piece!!!
Ink at its BEST!!
Keep that pen swinging!!!!
Sir Lancelott
Ink at its BEST!!
Keep that pen swinging!!!!
Sir Lancelott
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23rd Jan 2014 11:13am
Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 7:19am
What a terrific way to use proper nouns! You style is so smooth that I had to go back a few times to remind myself of their presence!
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re: Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 11:15am
Gosh bro. You got me chew sing like a mofo
over here! lol thanks a ton, I'm happy you found it enjoyable n appreciate your continued support of my ink. :)
over here! lol thanks a ton, I'm happy you found it enjoyable n appreciate your continued support of my ink. :)
Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 12:21pm
lol love the ending its exactly how im feeling today..this was Fabulous! i really enjoyed!!
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re: Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 2:05pm
Aaaaawww thank you! N yea I've had MANY of those days lol
Thank you my dear, appreciate you :)
Thank you my dear, appreciate you :)
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23rd Jan 2014 1:32pm
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Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 3:22pm
I love this so much!! I'm at a lose for words, but filled with thoughts and needing to read this again, it is inspired some creativity in my sluggish mind. So thank you!
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re: Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
23rd Jan 2014 3:42pm
Aaaawww you made me sooooo happy! I'm glad I could help
loosen your cobwebs lol n thank u profusely :)
loosen your cobwebs lol n thank u profusely :)
Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
24th Jan 2014 3:32am
Loving this brother. Pulls you in from the start provoking the right visuals as you go. Bring it my friend. Champion!
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re: Re: The Bullshit Series: Resifting the Bullshit
24th Jan 2014 5:46am
Thanks bro! I promise to always try to do my best to keep your interest, of course if that fails, I'll have to resort to bribery! lol
Truly, appreciate u much :)
Truly, appreciate u much :)
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