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Total Bitch Part 1

Do not patronize me, I am just as superior as you think you are towards me,
I am smarter than you give me credit for.

Don't treat me as a child, that shows me that you find me inferior...

You say that I do nothing but bitch and complain, and even though I don't see it;
It's an imperfection that I am trying to fix and mend.

You know that I would take a bullet for you and these kids, now and forever.

You think that I interrupt you on purpose.......
But that's not the case...
I am just so excited to have intelligent conversation,
I have a fast mouth and an even faster mind, that is only one curse.

Yes, I made a mistake, but I didn't lie, and I knew exactly when your sixth sense kicked in.

I can open myself to the true inner you and even though I screwed up, I hope that you can see my total devotion.

The moment your mind touched mine, it was an experience that I couldn't fake or pretend.
I felt your presence surround me, seen your aura with me,
It was something I've never  fathomed, and made me understand I should beware .
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