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Tanaga 2
Thus peept the civet in the
Drunken spree and quick did he
Jump the weasel out the bush
Cocksh me, boy, ya wee lil pussh!
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Photo:
Greek (attributed to the Brygos Painter)
Red-Figure terracotta tondo (plate), ca. 490 - 470 BCE
Ashmolean Museum, University of Oxford, Oxford, UK
ETA: I removed the image - it was too obvious!!!
Drunken spree and quick did he
Jump the weasel out the bush
Cocksh me, boy, ya wee lil pussh!
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Photo:
Greek (attributed to the Brygos Painter)
Red-Figure terracotta tondo (plate), ca. 490 - 470 BCE
Ashmolean Museum, University of Oxford, Oxford, UK
ETA: I removed the image - it was too obvious!!!
Published 21st Jan 2014
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The result is interesting as a marriage between an eastern format (phillipine?) and a Greek content. Good exercise, absinthe!
22nd Jan 2014 4:07am
Thanks, Celino! I am still trying to write poetry and work with metaphors better! Ahaha! Philippine culture has many metaphors but I don't use them. :) You know I am very poor with metaphors and symbolism in poetry.
I wanted to picture a drinking spree, where two men are comparing their penises with each other!
But that is not so poetically done! :)
Next time... :)
I wanted to picture a drinking spree, where two men are comparing their penises with each other!
But that is not so poetically done! :)
Next time... :)
23rd Jan 2014 11:04am
23rd Jan 2014 1:02pm
:) It is OK as a poem by itself, but not as a riddle! This riddle business is tougher than I thought ...
