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~Never really Fell~
All is well
as I walk out of hell
I guess I never really fell
but most couldn't tell
I was rebelling
and fighting
as my world was secretly falling
no one could reach me
I was too far away
until you came to stay
and my heart gave way
so thank you my dear
now I have no fear
I'm back in the land of the normals
ready to conform
as long as I no longer have to go there
where my fears are raw and bare
as I walk out of hell
I guess I never really fell
but most couldn't tell
I was rebelling
and fighting
as my world was secretly falling
no one could reach me
I was too far away
until you came to stay
and my heart gave way
so thank you my dear
now I have no fear
I'm back in the land of the normals
ready to conform
as long as I no longer have to go there
where my fears are raw and bare
Published 16th Feb 2011
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16th Feb 2011 7:43am
this is an excellent piece of poetry! youre really good! i like the rythm it has
16th Feb 2011 4:51pm
16th Feb 2011 5:02pm
I like the message my favorite part was how you walked out of hell..though the whole poem told of your feelings in a wonderful way..peace Crim :)
16th Feb 2011 5:57pm
thank you crim!!!the part about walking out of hell is my favorite part to hehe:)
9th Feb 2013 00:57am
