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Imperfection - Connection
like gloves that fit perfectly
two eggs sunny side up
finishing your sentences
Connection
bumps in the road
using humor to defuse
knowing it’s temporary
Connection
answers without questions
a sip of your coffee
the road is long
Connection
karma
skin
imperfection
Connection…
two eggs sunny side up
finishing your sentences
Connection
bumps in the road
using humor to defuse
knowing it’s temporary
Connection
answers without questions
a sip of your coffee
the road is long
Connection
karma
skin
imperfection
Connection…
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Re: Imperfection - Connection
19th Jan 2014 3:28pm
Re: Imperfection - Connection
19th Jan 2014 3:31pm
Re: Imperfection - Connection
Anonymous
19th Jan 2014 9:23pm
But the real beauty lies in imperfection and that's where the connection is. Very nice!
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Re: Imperfection - Connection
19th Jan 2014 9:44pm
Thank you
Being able to bask in the glow of imperfection is truly a life lesson.
xo
Speak
Being able to bask in the glow of imperfection is truly a life lesson.
xo
Speak
Re: Imperfection - Connection
19th Jan 2014 11:11pm
Beautiful imperfection you make the reader feel comfortable with.
Touching read x
Touching read x
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Re: Imperfection - Connection
20th Jan 2014 00:02am
Thanks luv
Imperfection is in all of us. I guess it's how we embrace it.
xo
Speak
Imperfection is in all of us. I guess it's how we embrace it.
xo
Speak
Re: Imperfection - Connection
20th Jan 2014 2:38am
"a sip of your coffee"...that stanza and line are my favorites. It's those details that make the poem. If you'd have said "a sip of coffee" the line wouldn't invite the intimacy of the connection. And I thought of it as a sip that was taken without asking and that was just fine.
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Re: Imperfection - Connection
20th Jan 2014 2:47am
Yep, you nailed it.
Coffee as the great equalizer
Thanks for your observation
Speak
Coffee as the great equalizer
Thanks for your observation
Speak
Re: Imperfection - Connection
20th Jan 2014 6:29pm
Knowing what he/she is thinking without a word being uttered....
Connection
Perfectly imperfect Ink! :) Xo
Connection
Perfectly imperfect Ink! :) Xo
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