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Subsides
within the grey of the morning sky
behind the clouds where the light subsides
a hollow release of a timid sigh
too shallow for the world to take notice
a sullen breeze carries the whispered cry
across the air the echoed plight
and when the words fall from sight
the world is too shallow to take notice
a question asked behind swollen eyes
what happens when emotions die?
upon the ground the tears have dried
too shallow for the world to take notice
emersed in the grey of a mourning sky
a sullen breeze and whispered cries
a question mark behind my eyes
but the world is too shallow to take notice
behind the clouds where the light subsides
a hollow release of a timid sigh
too shallow for the world to take notice
a sullen breeze carries the whispered cry
across the air the echoed plight
and when the words fall from sight
the world is too shallow to take notice
a question asked behind swollen eyes
what happens when emotions die?
upon the ground the tears have dried
too shallow for the world to take notice
emersed in the grey of a mourning sky
a sullen breeze and whispered cries
a question mark behind my eyes
but the world is too shallow to take notice
Published 15th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2014 10:34pm
Love the imagery and overall feeling of this, Taylor. "too shallow"; unnoticed; unseen; unheard. I want to say the third stanza is my favorite but each one contributes to this in such a way that... well, hell, they All are.
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