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Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-01-13) : Tulip
Kiss on your tulip
Opened up like a flower
To touch love's blooming
Senryu written in collaboration with Gabyyy!
Replacement of Arum Lilies by a Tulip parrot, more adapted to the poem and very sexy too
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Published 13th Jan 2014
| Edited 14th Jan 2014
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No, not at all and it is not a true tulip, more an exotic flower! But closer, in its shape, to the tulip, we talk about in our poem!
14th Jan 2014 1:08am
Then you should plant many tulips in your garden because we will write more and more poems like this one:)
14th Jan 2014 6:07am
14th Jan 2014 4:29am
wonderfully sensual write, Malin.
i love the image of the arum lilies... one of my favourite flowers.
i love the image of the arum lilies... one of my favourite flowers.
I would like to find the name (I have written a poem including the flower http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/130755-your-arum/). Arum lilies, in my mind, is a very sensual flower.
Thank you for your nice comment, Mia!
Thank you for your nice comment, Mia!
15th Jan 2014 8:37pm
exquisite two lips====tulips
flower ==when u part the lower lips
blooming ==clitoris
what a lovely imagination
of a vagina
tempered with a penis
the minds
and
tickled to such happiness
so as to orgasm
but remotely
naturally
keep a flower in mind
when you do it
15th Jan 2014 10:28pm
"This is in poorly lit areas of human activity, that appears the great spiritual lights, neighbors in the form of less pure signs", Louis Aragon, french poet (my translation).
In other words, erotic poetry keeps its beauty in its allusive images and it is not necessary to translate it in common words.
In other words, erotic poetry keeps its beauty in its allusive images and it is not necessary to translate it in common words.
16th Jan 2014 8:11am
