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Smile.
A picture says a thousand words.
Well, mine say a million.
Lies.
My smile is fake.
The glint in my eyes.
Just to cover and hide.
The pain inside.
The pain, the hurt, the agony.
More to an image then words itself.
The emotions behind it bewilder you.
With the conniving and evil people behind it.
The secret will never flourish.
They hide it inside, just to keep themselves alive,
Away from the hurt and the critisism.
Through the look of the smile,
happiness, may not exsist.
In the souls of the unknown,
Pain, will take over.
Pain, hurt, agony, will conquer,
Defeat, and Demolish the indescribable,
Human being.
The mind, the self centered, worried,
Incredulous, mind set.
Of the impossible.
To figure out, the meaning,behind the smile.
The smile, of the devil.
The smile of the young, incredible,
Lying, decieving,in-explicable,
Child that be pronounced in the picture.
A picture says a thousand words.
Smile, mine say a million.
Lies.
Well, mine say a million.
Lies.
My smile is fake.
The glint in my eyes.
Just to cover and hide.
The pain inside.
The pain, the hurt, the agony.
More to an image then words itself.
The emotions behind it bewilder you.
With the conniving and evil people behind it.
The secret will never flourish.
They hide it inside, just to keep themselves alive,
Away from the hurt and the critisism.
Through the look of the smile,
happiness, may not exsist.
In the souls of the unknown,
Pain, will take over.
Pain, hurt, agony, will conquer,
Defeat, and Demolish the indescribable,
Human being.
The mind, the self centered, worried,
Incredulous, mind set.
Of the impossible.
To figure out, the meaning,behind the smile.
The smile, of the devil.
The smile of the young, incredible,
Lying, decieving,in-explicable,
Child that be pronounced in the picture.
A picture says a thousand words.
Smile, mine say a million.
Lies.
Published 14th Feb 2011
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Anonymous
14th Feb 2011 1:45am
Very nice.
14th Feb 2011 1:50am
14th Feb 2011 3:33am
Ditch the full stops, as you are asking the reader to ignore them anyway.
Spellcheck it.
What pain? What lying? What evil? If you explained to us what is happening, instead of throwing down words without context, we might just have a poem here...these, as written, are just words, and the work is weaker for it...
Spellcheck it.
What pain? What lying? What evil? If you explained to us what is happening, instead of throwing down words without context, we might just have a poem here...these, as written, are just words, and the work is weaker for it...
14th Feb 2011 9:31pm
im sorry, but im not changing my poem. i dont write to make other people satisfied, i write to get my emotion out. what comes out, comes out. so please, respect that.
