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~To My Brother~
I miss you
my brother
my friend
I try to pretend
like I'm not hurting
but that unfortunately isn't true
I miss you David
why did you have to kill yourself?
I know its been a few years now
but I still think of you everyday
how we use to play
and we would laugh
I wish that wasn't just in the past
your life should have lasted
and not ended at sixteen
~I love you David and I always will~
my brother
my friend
I try to pretend
like I'm not hurting
but that unfortunately isn't true
I miss you David
why did you have to kill yourself?
I know its been a few years now
but I still think of you everyday
how we use to play
and we would laugh
I wish that wasn't just in the past
your life should have lasted
and not ended at sixteen
~I love you David and I always will~
Published 13th Feb 2011
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13th Feb 2011 7:42am
13th Feb 2011 10:40am
You just sound like you miss your brother... can't imagine how you must feel. This made me think of Bars For My Brother by Lowkey, as I can see you like poetry, you should check it out on youtube or something. Best wishes.
13th Feb 2011 4:20pm
i know how you feel i miss him every day two its hard going on without him and the others that were in our lives
14th Feb 2011 1:45am
14th Feb 2011 1:47am
i agree zom...we have lost alot of people in our lives havent we..love u lots
13th Feb 2011 4:44pm
Nina i'm sorry for your loss you've been through a lot for one so young..peace Crim
14th Feb 2011 1:48am
14th Feb 2011 1:49am
14th Feb 2011 1:54am
i wills i always do..i guess im the glue that holds my family together if i dont hang in there my whole family would fall apart
14th Feb 2011 1:55am
Nina your poems always touch my heart..it's beautiful that you can be so strong for your family..peace Crim
14th Feb 2011 2:05am
14th Feb 2011 2:23am
14th Feb 2011 4:55am
this is incredibly sad..
im sorry you feel so much pain from his death. but if it helps at all i think youre a wonderful person and a great poet.
great work by the way. keep it up.
im sorry you feel so much pain from his death. but if it helps at all i think youre a wonderful person and a great poet.
great work by the way. keep it up.
14th Feb 2011 4:56am
14th Feb 2011 6:02am
14th Feb 2011 8:23pm
i know how it feels to lose somebody who should still be standing next to you..
15th Feb 2011 00:40am
Anonymous
15th Feb 2011 2:32am
Darling, I'm awfully sorry. You are an amazing poet and shouldn't have to be burdened on holding your family together at your age. It's ridiculous. I can relate partially, my brother died before I was born, so I never could meet him, but I wish I could have experienced what you had with yours.
He was lucky to have you as a sister.
It's not right the way society works these days, but stay strong.
Also, this may sound like some sort of demented therapist, but if you ever need to talk, I'm an anonymous voice that you can vent to if you wish. My message box is always open, so to speak.
He was lucky to have you as a sister.
It's not right the way society works these days, but stay strong.
Also, this may sound like some sort of demented therapist, but if you ever need to talk, I'm an anonymous voice that you can vent to if you wish. My message box is always open, so to speak.
15th Feb 2011 2:39am
thank you and im sorry about your brother..having a brother is the best thing in the world..even if it does have to end sooner than it should...thank you very much
10th Jun 2011 8:36pm
Hey sis this made me cry really hard and i really miss him. I really wish i could of brought him back that day when we were at the funeral. I misses him so much
10th Jun 2011 8:43pm
