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Monster
You destroyed my heart
locked it in your rusty cage
whispering false kisses
into my arteries clogging
each one with evil ways
You made me love it
enough to block out
all your violence from
my rotting mind making
me want to be bad
Degrading me scraping
me to the floor punishing
me for what you created
always being your brutal
suck fuck monster
Injuring me every time
you turn me loose smothering
my mouth with force making me
suffer in your pleasure and
dark wickedness
You filled me with madness
ruining me for anyone else
turning me into a greasy
cup wanting to be dirty on
the lips of another
Evil is within me because of
you it's raw and sweet and
mysterious all from your
failure to love me so the monster
you formed will give to a more pensive man
locked it in your rusty cage
whispering false kisses
into my arteries clogging
each one with evil ways
You made me love it
enough to block out
all your violence from
my rotting mind making
me want to be bad
Degrading me scraping
me to the floor punishing
me for what you created
always being your brutal
suck fuck monster
Injuring me every time
you turn me loose smothering
my mouth with force making me
suffer in your pleasure and
dark wickedness
You filled me with madness
ruining me for anyone else
turning me into a greasy
cup wanting to be dirty on
the lips of another
Evil is within me because of
you it's raw and sweet and
mysterious all from your
failure to love me so the monster
you formed will give to a more pensive man
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Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 2:41am
Remember TL. Feelings are real. Though never let them dictate who you are. That's your own right babe. Sad and deep Angel. Heavy ink M'dear. Thank you. XO
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re: Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 3:34am
Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 3:30am
kick men in their balls
monster or cock
all will fall
and
then u can make them suck
urs
as they made u do theirs
be bold Tommielynn
monster or cock
all will fall
and
then u can make them suck
urs
as they made u do theirs
be bold Tommielynn
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11th Jan 2014 3:35am
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11th Jan 2014 4:48pm
Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 7:26am
This is a powerful write about some powerful pain. I am so sorry that you've been so cruelly and callously injured. Recognition is the first step to healing...let your intelligence overrule ignorance.
I am happy that poetry can serve as such a catharsis for you...and me for that matter.
I am happy that poetry can serve as such a catharsis for you...and me for that matter.
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re: Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 1:55pm
Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 6:40pm
Thanks for this...I know this pain all too well. I know what itīs like. Raw, brutal and angry...love it.=) let the feelings come, but donīt let this consume you.
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re: Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 9:24pm
Sorry for your pain, it sucks terribly, I thank you so much for your words and reading me. :)
Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 7:42pm
Sad how I can understand both sides of this poem and imagine the guilty pleasure and self hatred of the receiving and the giving, The feelings the same.But instead represented differently.
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re: Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 9:27pm
I appreciate your truth, I feel where your coming from.Thank you so much. :)
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2014 9:48pm
maryanna deeeeeeep sisteress....rM
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11th Jan 2014 10:20pm
Re: Monster
11th Jan 2014 10:03pm
Ooh wow dark strong feelings to please one by being allowed to be pleased in was they desire instead of allowing ur own desire to control but being controlled. I agree with Twitch Sway
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11th Jan 2014 10:22pm