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"This One's NOT !!!" … A Poem written by Big Virge 29/10/2007
I've Had This Said …
A NUMBER of Times … !!!
When It Comes To Lines …
In ….. " My Poems " …..
"Virgil Man !
Your poetry is, just too long !"
Well Here's A SHOCK … !!!
Cos' This One's NOT … !!!!!
Attention Spans …
Have CLEARLY DROpped … !!!
Like Heavy Bombs …
Taleban Have … " Stocked " … !!!
Well So THEY Say … !!?!!
The Types Who Play Political Games … !!!
Who Would Probably CLAIM ...
My Views Are WRONG … !!!!!
And That My Poetry Is …
... A Bit TOO LONG … !!!
Well This Little Script …
Proves To Critics …
That …………….
" This One's NOT !!! "
LISTEN HERE :
https://soundcloud.com/user-16569179/this-ones-not-acapella-recorded-at-shoestring-studios
A NUMBER of Times … !!!
When It Comes To Lines …
In ….. " My Poems " …..
"Virgil Man !
Your poetry is, just too long !"
Well Here's A SHOCK … !!!
Cos' This One's NOT … !!!!!
Attention Spans …
Have CLEARLY DROpped … !!!
Like Heavy Bombs …
Taleban Have … " Stocked " … !!!
Well So THEY Say … !!?!!
The Types Who Play Political Games … !!!
Who Would Probably CLAIM ...
My Views Are WRONG … !!!!!
And That My Poetry Is …
... A Bit TOO LONG … !!!
Well This Little Script …
Proves To Critics …
That …………….
" This One's NOT !!! "
LISTEN HERE :
https://soundcloud.com/user-16569179/this-ones-not-acapella-recorded-at-shoestring-studios
Published 8th Jan 2014
| Edited 16th Mar 2021
Author's Note
Pretty self explanatory, everyone's got an opinion !!!
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 9:42pm
LMAO! Poems don't have a length to them. A poem, short or long, who is the judge of that?
Hey Cassandra !!!!!
It's great to see that, it made you laugh !!!
Indeed though, who is … or ... has the right to judge ???
…. which was also, the basis, in many ways, and, the inspiration for the piece !
Great Comment.
Much appreciated !!!!!
I do write some longuns' though … LOL !!!!!
It's great to see that, it made you laugh !!!
Indeed though, who is … or ... has the right to judge ???
…. which was also, the basis, in many ways, and, the inspiration for the piece !
Great Comment.
Much appreciated !!!!!
I do write some longuns' though … LOL !!!!!
8th Jan 2014 9:52pm
NO BLAME …
AT ALL …. Alan !!!! LOL !!!
You must check the dates of when some of these were written man !
You merely stated your opinion, which you are entitled to, and as you can see, over the years, people have done so.
So, for a change, I figured I should address the issue poetically, and keep it brief.
The success is in the smile it put on your face, nothing more, nothing less …..
It's a nice departure for me to retain my social commentary, whilst finding some humour too !!!!!
Thanks for reading & commenting !!!!!
AT ALL …. Alan !!!! LOL !!!
You must check the dates of when some of these were written man !
You merely stated your opinion, which you are entitled to, and as you can see, over the years, people have done so.
So, for a change, I figured I should address the issue poetically, and keep it brief.
The success is in the smile it put on your face, nothing more, nothing less …..
It's a nice departure for me to retain my social commentary, whilst finding some humour too !!!!!
Thanks for reading & commenting !!!!!
