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Mini-renku : angel in the sky
Angel in the sky
Pretty eyes like emerald
Silky milky skin
I love you so much, I love
I miss you too much, really
Tigress when angry
Fire flames through the gun-eyes
Teeth ready to bite
I am afraid to lose you
I need to be so quiet
Red lips as honey
Face of an pretty angel
A sweet mezzo voice
I huddle up in your arms
I cuddle you so sweetly
Really for me
It is a true paradise
I love you so much
Published 7th Jan 2014
| Edited 22nd Apr 2014
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7th Jan 2014 11:04pm
Thank you Gabriel, I think the music of this part of poem is nice, like a song! Hard after to keep this music all in the poem... But I think I progress for that.
8th Jan 2014 5:21am
I adore this poem you wrote here, because I too know what it is like to love that much.....
very beautifully written.... <3
very beautifully written.... <3
8th Jan 2014 7:48am
15th Jan 2014 00:26am
Beautiful... I love this line "Fire flames through the gun-eyes" so descriptive...
15th Jan 2014 3:54pm
