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Slut
It must be my imagination. Or is it a curse.
There is a man who keeps following me. In the day.
It's like he had seen me for the first time. At night.
He is a hungry animal. He prowls me.
I cannot cast him aside. I walk to work in the morning.
He sees the skin behind my knees. He walks with me.
There is a brief conversation. He wants to know me.
I get on the train and leave him. His eyes on my legs.
I sit at the desk. He stands behind me.
He sees the skin on my thighs. He breathes heavy.
There is a brief conversation. He wants to know me.
His hand descends to my knees. My heart darts.
Is it a daydream. But it feels so real.
The same man every morning. With many names.
But nothing is different. His eyes, his hands, his fingers.
His lips and the warmth of his breath. A phantasy.
I come to the cafe each night. He is there.
Just before I walk out he comes. There is a brief conversation.
He strokes my arm and I laugh. His hand runs upon me.
Smooth and warm and I blush. He walks with me.
Each night he has different name. All else is the same.
Is it my imagination. Or a nightmare.
My breasts tremble in his hands. He licks and sucks them.
He rides me, naked, and thrusts. Up to my neck.
In the morning I pass by the market. He sees me.
I pick up some olives and he acquaints himself. A new name.
The old woman selling cheese smiles. I walk away shyly.
The man of many faces haunts me. He knows me.
A familiar flatter against my breast. In the train.
He slips his fingers between my legs. He sighs.
Tonight he will fuck me. He will cry.
This body is no curse. This is a blessing.
There is a man who keeps following me. In the day.
It's like he had seen me for the first time. At night.
He is a hungry animal. He prowls me.
I cannot cast him aside. I walk to work in the morning.
He sees the skin behind my knees. He walks with me.
There is a brief conversation. He wants to know me.
I get on the train and leave him. His eyes on my legs.
I sit at the desk. He stands behind me.
He sees the skin on my thighs. He breathes heavy.
There is a brief conversation. He wants to know me.
His hand descends to my knees. My heart darts.
Is it a daydream. But it feels so real.
The same man every morning. With many names.
But nothing is different. His eyes, his hands, his fingers.
His lips and the warmth of his breath. A phantasy.
I come to the cafe each night. He is there.
Just before I walk out he comes. There is a brief conversation.
He strokes my arm and I laugh. His hand runs upon me.
Smooth and warm and I blush. He walks with me.
Each night he has different name. All else is the same.
Is it my imagination. Or a nightmare.
My breasts tremble in his hands. He licks and sucks them.
He rides me, naked, and thrusts. Up to my neck.
In the morning I pass by the market. He sees me.
I pick up some olives and he acquaints himself. A new name.
The old woman selling cheese smiles. I walk away shyly.
The man of many faces haunts me. He knows me.
A familiar flatter against my breast. In the train.
He slips his fingers between my legs. He sighs.
Tonight he will fuck me. He will cry.
This body is no curse. This is a blessing.
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Re: Slut
7th Jan 2014 9:32am
captivating. I enjoy watching you being watched. on the street, on the train. or only in your mind.
regardless, these interludes are stimulating...
regardless, these interludes are stimulating...
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re: Re: Slut
7th Jan 2014 12:34pm
Re: Slut
Very sexy poem!
It is a pity your poems have to finish, Absinthe. I think I would keep reading this write for hours or days. However, you had to close the circle of this poem. Waiting for the next one...
It is a pity your poems have to finish, Absinthe. I think I would keep reading this write for hours or days. However, you had to close the circle of this poem. Waiting for the next one...
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re: Re: Slut
7th Jan 2014 12:35pm
Re: Slut
7th Jan 2014 9:35pm
You have a beautiful grace to your manipulation of words, absinthe. :) Really enjoyed being pulled in with a soft sense of sensual suspense too.
I was a bit distracted by the punctuation. It interrupted the flow to me.(imho) Welcome to DUP! Pen On~
I was a bit distracted by the punctuation. It interrupted the flow to me.(imho) Welcome to DUP! Pen On~
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re: Re: Slut
8th Jan 2014 2:31am
A pleasure to meet you rain1courte - and thank you for the welcome and comment!
The punctuation - oh yes - I seem to read in intermittent breaths, and thus try to work with a 2-sentence line. All my life, I used to write long convoluted sentences, perhaps my poetry is a reaction against that.
Thanks you for the comment, rain1courte, it makes me think more about this form.
:)
The punctuation - oh yes - I seem to read in intermittent breaths, and thus try to work with a 2-sentence line. All my life, I used to write long convoluted sentences, perhaps my poetry is a reaction against that.
Thanks you for the comment, rain1courte, it makes me think more about this form.
:)
Re: Slut
9th Jan 2014 2:47am
Very nice story, captiving from the beginning to the end! Like a novel, but in poetry!
I love it, absinthe! Beautiful ink!
I love it, absinthe! Beautiful ink!
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re: Re: Slut
13th Jan 2014 3:07pm
Re: Slut
10th Jan 2014 4:47pm
My breasts tremble
in his hands.
He licks and sucks them.
He rides me,
naked, and thrusts. ......(Up to my neck....
The man named DESIRE
just flirts
within your mind and skirts
lovely lucky guy he
who smell perfumes
that have ye
good sexy poetry
in his hands.
He licks and sucks them.
He rides me,
naked, and thrusts. ......(Up to my neck....
The man named DESIRE
just flirts
within your mind and skirts
lovely lucky guy he
who smell perfumes
that have ye
good sexy poetry
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re: Re: Slut
13th Jan 2014 3:11pm
Re: Slut
13th Jan 2014 2:33pm
very lovely to have some artful erotique 'round beside
all the 'deep'
crass ass
selfwankerin
fuckery
(o'dear, did I say that? pardon me DUP,pleas)
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re: Re: Slut
13th Jan 2014 3:15pm
re: re: Re: Slut
13th Jan 2014 6:20pm
Honey, ye do'know the half of it, & this being interwebbedness,
never
likely
a firsthand sampling.....of anysuch 'real' thing
y'ikes!(yknow?)
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re: re: re: Re: Slut
14th Jan 2014 12:30pm
:) The misery of being an artist is that you will forever know only half of it ... and this thing called genius is merely our escape strategy ...
:)
:)
Re: Slut
13th Jan 2014 10:17pm
"A familiar flatter against my breast. In the train. He slips his fingers between my legs. He sighs. Tonight he will fuck me. He will cry.
This body is no curse. This is a blessing"
- last stanza has the flow of a liturgical reading, and your church of the swelling body blessed, i enter it's temple through your words, bow and kiss the hand of her priestess
This body is no curse. This is a blessing"
- last stanza has the flow of a liturgical reading, and your church of the swelling body blessed, i enter it's temple through your words, bow and kiss the hand of her priestess
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re: Re: Slut
14th Jan 2014 12:33pm
Thank you for this beautiful Spiritual Reading of my poem. Where the word was made Flesh.
Re: Slut
26th Feb 2014 5:16pm
This piece is incredibly sensual and breathtaking! You are stunning my dear!
This man follows me too...I just never paid attention...lol
This man follows me too...I just never paid attention...lol
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