~BLEEDING THE PAIN OUT~

Excellent emotion..beautiful..peace Crimsin :)

thanks crim if i may call u that

Of course Crim is fine..love the honesty of your writing..peace Crim :)

thank u i love how passionate ur writing is

Thank you..peace Crim :)

:) (:

i can relate very easily to this.. great poem.

goods i like it when people can relate to what im feeling and thinking :) thank you dalton

I really like the part:
"Emotions
twisted and tangled
your heart hanging by a nail"

Perhaps that could be bolded as opposed to "Anger bubbles to the top"

In my opinion, it is the stronger section, but it's your call.
I like this, again.

thank you i will take that into consideration

wow this is an awesome poem i can related to :)
and i really like the last 2 lines!

fantastic job!

thank you very much :)