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Remortage your life with Interest
Absorbed insecurity of aspirational advert,
Invades your twee semi-detached show home,
Cellulite-free humble goddess of perfection,
Beckons your husbands' roving eye,
Babysits your mini-consumers brainwash,
As the unique spirit slowly melting away,
Being vacuumed out via hypnotic cathode ray,
Animal urges whimper and retreat in the cold,
As earthly desires repackaged,fabricated and resold,
(Repeat ad breaks as required-take 5 times daily)
Side effects include self loathing and envy
Invades your twee semi-detached show home,
Cellulite-free humble goddess of perfection,
Beckons your husbands' roving eye,
Babysits your mini-consumers brainwash,
As the unique spirit slowly melting away,
Being vacuumed out via hypnotic cathode ray,
Animal urges whimper and retreat in the cold,
As earthly desires repackaged,fabricated and resold,
(Repeat ad breaks as required-take 5 times daily)
Side effects include self loathing and envy
Published 11th Feb 2011
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18th Feb 2011 11:34pm
20th Feb 2011 5:09pm
20th Feb 2011 5:13pm
Very clever. I most definitely like it, particularly this line 'Invades your twee semi-detached show home,
Cellulite-free humble goddess of perfection,' Well done, Ms.
Cellulite-free humble goddess of perfection,' Well done, Ms.
20th Feb 2011 5:54pm
Thanks for the comments-much appreciated.This one nearly didn't make it as I didn't write it down and my pc crashed whilst typing it out, as I thought of it!
