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The demons in me
Who Am I?
I am violence
I am death
I am me
When I needed you
You fled from me
I begged you, pleaded:
You painted my future red
I screamed into pitch black
An empty hollow grave
All I asked was for a savior
But I know my heart will
Forever remain here
I am Violence
I am death
Sin is me
And you:
You are who made me.
I am a creation of lies,
A monster inside
You are my master
I am your pawn.
I am violence
I am death
I am me
When I needed you
You fled from me
I begged you, pleaded:
You painted my future red
I screamed into pitch black
An empty hollow grave
All I asked was for a savior
But I know my heart will
Forever remain here
I am Violence
I am death
Sin is me
And you:
You are who made me.
I am a creation of lies,
A monster inside
You are my master
I am your pawn.
Published 4th Jan 2014
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5th Jan 2014 8:46am
Wow wht a dense piece this is, love the darkness you ccreated here.
This is for you my friend.
I was once lost in it. I cannot give away my secret, you must find it within yourself.
I'll post this soon
Monster of lies
Eyes that cry
Creation inside
Pawn for destruction
Maker of free will
Choosing to hate
Vanity
Ascending into
Hollow grave
Screaming into black
Heart is void
Salvation is found alone
Save your soul
Before being lost
Swallowed into the abyss
Chasm that feeds
Serpentine teeth
The only thing you'll hate
Is yourself
-ADuarte
This is for you my friend.
I was once lost in it. I cannot give away my secret, you must find it within yourself.
I'll post this soon
Monster of lies
Eyes that cry
Creation inside
Pawn for destruction
Maker of free will
Choosing to hate
Vanity
Ascending into
Hollow grave
Screaming into black
Heart is void
Salvation is found alone
Save your soul
Before being lost
Swallowed into the abyss
Chasm that feeds
Serpentine teeth
The only thing you'll hate
Is yourself
-ADuarte
5th Jan 2014 6:36pm
Thank you. :) That is amazing.. You write so flawlessly and make my poetry like childs play! I hope to be as good of a writer as you down the road!
5th Jan 2014 6:46pm
If you don't mind.. I would like to take what you wrote and add to it. if I may? And I will show you what I make of it. :)
5th Jan 2014 6:56pm
Thank u I appreciate tht and to be honest ive been writing since i was 10 yrs not lying
5th Jan 2014 6:57pm
5th Jan 2014 7:05pm
Wow, this screams loudly from the empty hollow grave. Love it with its haunting images, powerful inking :)
5th Jan 2014 10:12pm
