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CONNECT
Both you and I, great and small
Are born to die or rise and fall.
The laws immutable
Are not disputable
So say all
Neither moon nor galaxy
Is immune to gravity
The laws immutable
Are not disputable
So say all
Yet such laws are hokum
When one soul unbroken
Can connect a thought
Unspoken
To us all.
Are born to die or rise and fall.
The laws immutable
Are not disputable
So say all
Neither moon nor galaxy
Is immune to gravity
The laws immutable
Are not disputable
So say all
Yet such laws are hokum
When one soul unbroken
Can connect a thought
Unspoken
To us all.
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Though physical laws may govern All,to the universe, and each to one another--souls linked--we are bound . . .energy that is neither wasted, nor depleted....
I am drawn within the almost spiritual transcendence of this piece!
Sioch`ain leat, mo Chara,
Enchantress
I am drawn within the almost spiritual transcendence of this piece!
Sioch`ain leat, mo Chara,
Enchantress
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2014 9:52pm
thar she bloes whale! Rm
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4th Jan 2014 5:54am
Reminds me of the multiple discovery phenomenon where to people discover the same thing at the same(ish) time independently. Like with calculus, or the telegraph.
i LOVE the mechanics of this poem. Great words! Great structure!
i LOVE the mechanics of this poem. Great words! Great structure!
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4th Jan 2014 10:15am
Thank you, thank you for on clear days it is the boy on the hill not the man in the street that sees furthest.
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2014 10:44am
Seems that the sum of things contains of more than any image can tell, mind pondering one!
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2014 3:19am
How magical this is. Communicating isn't always in words. Beautiful! :)
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6th Jan 2014 9:18am
That's it Flowergirl - the most important thing we can do sometimes is just connect - thanks for connecting