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On Hold
You made me feel like the person I wanted to be,
Not the disappointment that I am.
Like I could have the future I've always envisioned,
Not just getting swept along the current.
I guess for that I must thank you,
Even though I'm angry that you made this past tense,
And now I'm just me again,
The empty shell I've always been.
Not the disappointment that I am.
Like I could have the future I've always envisioned,
Not just getting swept along the current.
I guess for that I must thank you,
Even though I'm angry that you made this past tense,
And now I'm just me again,
The empty shell I've always been.
Published 1st Jan 2014
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1st Jan 2014 5:39pm
....sad emotions, though your pen seem to convey a sense of solace...Xo
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3rd Jan 2014 00:30am
Preparing for the worst, I guess that's a form of solace.. Thank you for stopping by.
2nd Jan 2014 2:17am
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3rd Jan 2014 00:22am
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3rd Jan 2014 00:31am
Yeah, it's a bit of a solemn piece. Thank you for enjoying my work and thanks for the warm welcome.
3rd Jan 2014 7:47am
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